Based on the analysis of your audience feedback, is there a consensus on how effective your work is? Do the replies pick out similar things to comment on? Do you accept the comments of your audience or would you want to challenge them?
Throughout my audience feedback people commented on a well chosen use black & white, continuing on the narrative, leaving the 'look' at the end a little bit long, shots of eyes, water and fingers. This was all brilliant news as these are all the things I set out to try and show in the first place in order to achieve an amotive response from the audience and when not watching with a critical perspective these factors add up to draw out an emotional response. I accept all the Comments made about my film. I know where I went wrong and would love to do it again without making the same mistake i.e. shaky shots, not enough footage.
If you were able to re-visit your work and develop it further which aspects would you focus on the improve the piece. Try and explain why you would make the changes.
Wider variety of shots of the couple. More of the girl after the attack. More Stable shots. More shots of the girl with the boy on the side. More depth of field shots.
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