Pros: Mise En Scene
-'Visually Pleasing, even in B&W'
-Silhouettes
-'Shots repeated, but don't get old'
-Will's posture whilst playing piano
Editing
-'Flows superbly'
-Focusing on shower head and piano keys
-'Sound to Image matching - Very Good'
-Piano & Singing parts cut in 'cleverly' and 'remind that it's a music video'
Camerawork
-Good variety of shots
-Shot clarity (HD Focusing)
-'Great' Camera angles
-Shot Framing
Acting
-Well received in general
Cons:
2 of my 25 feedback sheets commented that the final sequence dragged on too long
Several people commented on the 2/3 shakey shots (although one single person commented saying that they thought it worked rather well in one of the parts)
Another couple of people commented saying they actors should have worn different clothes for the flashbacks
3 people commented on too much shot repetition
Criticisms:
"Emotional story line"(Suggests immediate understanding of the characters and what is going on)
"Brave to carry on the story line, but it works"
"Captures viewers"
"Silhouette carry mood well"
"Good song choice, fits narrative" (Suggests some people are so engrossed in the narrative that they have forgotten that the film they are watching is promoting the film. Does this take away from the film or prove to give a memorable film which helps raise the song's profile?)
"Top Class Editing - Outstanding!"
"Emotions shown through eyes. You see emotions through the girls eyes at the beginning and through the boy's at the end, brilliant!" (This comment made me smile the most as this is something I had wanted to include in the film the whole way through and hoped it would be the key to provoking emotion, that fact that somebody picked up on my little subconscious clue meant the world to me)
"Powerful images that move"
Out of my 25 feedback sheets 23 people gave me a medium Lv. 4 mark and 2 people gave me a high Lv. 3 mark.
Also from reading my feedback sheets I got the distinct impression that as all the basics of the film are so well covered (minus the shakey section of film that I loathe and drives me crazy) and the quality of the HD recordings is so professional-grade, people expect a lot higher quality standard from what they are watching and forget that they are in fact just watching a student film and I feel this leads to some of the harsher criticisms I received. The shakey section of the one part of the film I would give my arm to change, it annoys me to such an extent. If I could go back to re-do the filming from what I have learned, I would have gotten a wider variety of shots of Will playing Piano, bigger variety of shots of them as a couple and in different clothes and made ABSOLUTELY sure that there were NO shakey shots. I have to say I do agree with all of my audience feedback and is all completely fair and am still pleased with the vast majority of it all.